Rts on his part but BECAUSE SHE LITERALLY COMES DOWN OUT THE SKY AND ANNOUNCES HERSELF AND HER WEAKNESSES FOR NO REASON AT ALL This leads to a war being Effetto domino fought between the main character gods and nations THAT ENDS IN A DRAW RESOLVES NOTHING and apparently has the sole purpose of allowing the author to drag out what should have been a straightorward story to I can only assume sell books to people stupid enough to buy themThe awful execution is particularly heart wrenching because the original
Concept Is So Good Stillis so good Still is too late The Midwifes Miracle Baby for me I ve lost money and time to this insanely bad book Please avenge me by not spending your money or time on this dreck Fingun I have precious little time to read now but in the last 2 weeks I have enjoyed the hell out of Author William Arands two Super hero booksA lit rpg book that used the tools so elouently I didn t notice until the end of the Mendozas Miracle first bookWELL done and sign me upor the next oneMichael Anderle Author Super Sales on Super Heroes 2 is not lesfic but it continues the very entertaining graphically aurally violent world of good people bad people amoral people and people who are just trying to survive regardless of moral intentions labels or outcomes that we met in Book 1I enjoyed Book 1 so much that I decided to immediately begin Book 2 planning to The Millionaires Mistress Bundle finish aew unusual books before returning to lesfic in a couple weeks when January startsThe pace absolutely explodes as do lots of other people and things in this book Felix decides to run or governor as his Legion empire has now expanded to a second city At this city btw slavery is illegal and so all his slaves were given the opportunity to leave him I was glad to have the slavery part of his power being reduced in this book The head supervillain and lots of superheroes think a dead Felix would be niceFelix learns how to portal to another world and build Legion World pretty much subjugating the natives Then the native gods get involvedLots of battles lots of action lots of violence and lots of politicking Given the large number of characters involved in this detailed story it s amazing that everyone has very distinct personalities and behaviors Very creative world building without
SACRIFICING INDIVIDUAL CHARACTERS THAT S HARDindividual characters That s hard do and it s done well hereWhile this narrator did an adeuate job I preferred the narrator rom book 1 I rate Super Sales on Super Heroes 2 as a solid 45 With the previous narrator I might have rounded up but I m recommending this book with a 4 rating I really want to give you a 5 star review Gave you extra points in book 1 Miss Westons Masquerade for benefit of the doubt STOP with your chauvinistic bull Pretty sure your writing comesrom a place of insanely inflated ego I appreciate that you learned some military tactics in this book As a The Millionaires Proposal former military officer its obvious that you learned the subject Yes your story line has great promise and is uniue No no one wants to read about your MC being so incredibly amazing everyemalebeastkin in the books want him Oooh tell me about how this humble middle manager doesnt want every Michael (New Orleans Knights female in the book to be head over heals in love with him but his personality is just SOOOOO amazing that they cant help it STOP just add another male character maybe 2 EUREKA you can still write a uniue story and not have everyemale Memoirs of a Millionaires Mistress falling in love with a CEO who camerom middle management burger Meet Phoenix flipping I really love your story line pretty sure I hate you as a writer though Impressive in its own rights PS if you keep doing this bs in book 3 I am 1 star reviewing you no matter how good the rest of the plot is I recommend you seek professional counseling andigure out why you are writing in the manner before completing The The Mistletoe Melody (A Brookhollow Story, first 34ths of the book are ok but there s no internal continuity There are plot jumps that are there only to move this story along There are some words that have meaning in our language that must mean something else in the world where the story takes place There s too much drudgery withoutorward movementThe last 14 of the book is great Exactly what I was looking Sid and Sam for in the book and series Until this point I was looking at a 2 star review In this second book in the series Legion tries to expand into another city in another state He runs into uite a lot of red tape and after having the governor killed decides to runor office himselfHe also discovers how to make portals into other worldsThese lead to all sorts of complications. Cities So they’ve packed up the car put in all the reuisite Screwball forms gotten the approvals and set out to start Legion up in a new city The problem though is the local government had no idea who they were selling permits to Approvingorms or To Felix and Legion And now they’re about to ind ou. Xt guy I ve been
Reading Fantasy For The Lastfantasy The Outlaw Jesse James for the last years after all but even I have limits and when the story goes beyond those points it begins to lose its appeal Thelaws begin to outweigh the un stuff so to say This story is not uite at that point but it is definitely on its way there and that is ollowing the exact same blueprint as was set down in the Selfless Hero way there and that is ollowing the exact same blueprint as was set down in the Selfless Hero which only helps reinforce my original view that both series are essentially the exact same story with just the location changed superhero world vs LitRPG
fantasy world and the character names changed and pretty much everything else justworld and the character names changed and pretty much everything else just to it For what it is worth the Super Sales on Superheroes series is a better version of the Selfless Hero trilogy I actually do not mind the characters to much in this story Felix is what he is but he is tolerable except at his worse moments Though it is worth noting that he is growing less tolerable the he grows in power His girlfriends are a The Erotic Mind fun bunch with uniue personalities and uirks of their own even if all of them are ultra sexually submissive in nature Soar Arand has managed to avoid Dancing at Midnight (The Splendid Trilogy, falling into the trap he did in the Selfless Hero trilogy of adding so many characters to Felix s harem that the original characters get shoved out of the way andorgotten about Here we stuck mostly with the team Felix assembled in the last tale and I thought that benefited the story as we already had a chance to grow attached to those characters One would think that the undercurrent of misogyny the power It Hurts When I Poop! a Story for Children Who Are Scared to Use the Potty fantasy elements the somewhat cringey romance elements or even Arand s strange take on morality would be the biggest problemor the story but weirdly that was not the case The biggest thing that hurt this tale compared to the Here With Me (Together first instalment was theact that a twist halfway through morphed the tale Double Deception (Code Name: Danger from aun typical superpowered world setting to that of a basic DD Wicked Lies (Men of Summer, fantasy worldeel I Grave Tattoo feel like this development has the potential to really hurt the story in the next instalment because it sucked Random thought I think what always leaves me most puzzled by Arand s books is the pregnancyetish I have a basic idea of why everything else could be appealing even the horrifically bad stuff but this one just escapes my grasp It is not like this even hurts Arand s stories It is just there andweird I m going to write this off as one of those things that is a result of my general lack of being able to grasp why people in general are so obsessed with the idea of legacy All in all this was an OK read I ll read the third book but I m Georgia and the Tycoon fearing it will end up being a not particularly satisfying end to this story Which will happenor sure if we get a retelling of Selfless Hero 3 Rating 3 stars I still Churchills Trial feel like Arand has someun ideas and his writing is A Conspiracy of Ravens (Lady Trent Mysteries fairly engaging but thelaws really hurt the story Audio Note We got the dreaded switch of narrator Jeff Hays to Nick Podehl On the surface it should not been too much of an issue as both guys are two of the best narrators in the Lakeside Redemption fantasyLitRPG genres but it still ends up being a negative because no matter how awesome Podehl is and his is awesome and no matter that he clearly does try to be consistent with Hays take on the characters when still have to deal with theact that we got a new narrator and that hurt the consistency of the audio adaptation Moaning aside I think this was a In Pursuit of a Princess fairly smooth change It helps that both chosen narrators are top notch but I still wish Arand had just managed to maintain Haysor the whole series I wonder what prompted the change Surely it could not have been a timing or price issue as I m certain that Nick Podehl is every bit as expensive and busy as Jeff Hays Good and intenseI rated this one a little lower mainly over the last part of the book Too much chaos and too many balls in the air eels like an open wound That said I wouldn t be troubled if this series wasn t Awesome Keep up the great writing I love the cast of characters I m sure the next one will rock I didn t like Empire Strikes Back as much either Just saying This book has a great concept and even some decent writing The problem is the author has no storytelling skills This series started with a simple plot build wealth in a city run by a super villain Success brought mystery attackers so building wealth now included inding out who was attacking the main character In this book the main character discovers his attacker not through any effo. T on paper Run your company make money be your own boss settle down Except that with running a business comes an inordinate amount of responsibilities Like making sure everything keeps running and your people are paid Worrying about the longevity of his company Felix begins to expand into other. .
Action Packed Seuel Read this immediately after book 1 as it starts the action shortly after those events and pretty much doesn t take its oot off the gas Dark Awakening for the rest of the book Trust me you ll need theresh memory Once again we re treated to well edited continuous rolling narrative action along with solid humor drama mayhem magic and a mind blowing expansion of the plot And yes pancakesThe characters remain true and multi dimensional growing as we watch sometimes with cloudy undetermined results Relationships grow and change too in meaningful ways The environment changes a lot in very unexpected ways The editing remains awesome and the cover artist is brilliantAs always it s a real joy to read Arand s work and I remain a huge Hawks Way (Hawks Way fan Highly recommended Rating 15 stars This book sucked I didn t have high hopes after theirst book and I didn t actually plan on reading this book until I Family Men found out there is a crossover with this book and Wild Wastes which is a series I do like so I bit the bullet and read this book There were multiple times I wanted to stop reading Theact that I Creative Participation finished the book is the only reason I gave it 15 stars instead of 1 star I usually only give books I could notinish 1 star There were so many things that did not make sense in the story I am huge WHY person In every story I like to know the underlying reason each character takes a particular action and I get pissed off if the reason isn t logical now this is case specific if a character is a homicidal maniac and he does some crazy shit I can understand that based on the context of the character being crazy Felix was all over the place with his planning and none of it made sense He expanded legion into another town and opened up a college still don t know why Later in the story he decided he wanted to open up a non profit prison then later in the story he decided he was going to run Sabina Spielrein for Governor What is the overall purpose of any of that To make money No because he is actually loosing money To gain power He says throughout the entire book that he doesn t want power So why Then the story takes an even weirder turn view spoiler We get ourirst glimpse of Wild Wastes crossover when a portal opens up to Felix Cognitive Radio Networks for aew seconds Anyone who read the 2nd Wild wastes book should remember the scene When Felix sees that he starts handing out portal making powers to everyone around him because yeah it of course is that easy and they go off to another world that he is now calling legion world Once their he meets Gods So superheroes and magic aren t enough Now they have to add Gods into the mix Then even stupid shit happens Felix gets Felicia to build a machine that transfers his peoples good thoughts about him so that he can transfer those thoughts into worship or a couple of gods Because of course that seems pretty straightforward to me sarcasm I bet
if he asked Felicia to come up with a machine that could turn his arts into lying unicornshe asked Felicia to come up with a machine that could turn his arts into The Time It Never Rained flying unicorns would say no problem Then even after all the buildup oforces people and machines to turn Legion into a powerhouse company that nobody can mess with Felix still ends up alone and being attacked at the end of the story hide spoiler The Super Sales on Superhero series is a crazy but still enjoyable blend of superherovillain stories harem The Child of the Soul and Other Stories fantasy and LitRPG It works mostly because Arand s writing isairly engaging and the story is Childrens Phantasies fun The story in this second book really just picks uprom where the last book left off Felix along with his harem of superpowered girlfriends just continued to spread and expand his Legion cult With that in mind they popped up in a new city to start their expansion plans I really enjoyed the irst book in this series despite its laws This second instalment of the series was OK but definitely not uite as The Soviet Union fun as theirst book I think I did myself no Gods and Heroes favours by reading the Selfless Hero trilogy series between instalments of Super Sales on Super Heroes as that series got worse by the book and taught me a lot about what William D Arand wants and intendsor his stories and characters hint Not the same as what I wanted The result of being Science, Technology and Culture forewarned with that knowledge was that I was expecting and duly seen the negative developments in the progression of the story and the characters Arand likes what he likes and the the story progresses the some of his views and preferences tend to annoy me I can take a good male powerantasy as well as the ne. In a world No Beast So Fierce full of super powers Felix had a pretty crappy one After learning to harness his ability to modify any item he owns he now runs a corporation that is rapidly expanding Legion After tangling with the local Heroes guild they’veinally settled into a semblance of stability Sounds grea.